By their nature, mobile apps restrict your creative freedom. You have a limited amount of space to
convey your message. Users want to quickly find information or perform an action rather than scrolling
through endless amounts of unnecessary content. Also, keep in mind viewers look primarily at the center
of their device screen as indicated in this eye-tracking study from
Briggsby.
Concise writing takes time and hard work. It is really worth you ask yourself two questions when you go
create custom content or want to update existing one.
- What is this page about?
- What is this page really about?
Example:
- My page is about my Sunset Restaurant.
- This article is really about attracting guests to my Sunset Restaurant,
let them know its offer, its working hours and how to make a reservation.
See the difference.
The first answer is accurate but vague. It could be about almost anything content-related.
The second answer provides the writer with a clear understanding of what one is trying to communicate to its audience.
Having a focus is essential when producing quality copy.
It's good practice to answer the second question several times; a more focused answer will help you develop text
that is targeted and impactful for the reader.
For mobile content, concise writing is essential. In this case, the necessity has more to do with the screen size
than the user’s attention span. Your goal is to present the user with as much information as possible without
requiring the user to swipe or tap, wipe your page clean of anything that’s unnecessary.
French writer Antoine Saint-Exupéry reminds us all the value on the side of simplicity.
Often, less is more. The more fluff you can cut, the more efficient you can be in conveying your message.